Here's how my novel begins -- and it draws on a lot of the "bad girl" research I've done over the years about women in history. The first draft is nearly finished. Yay! Perhaps in the new year I'll get back to blogging. Perhaps...
Inga’s night had been restless, and she was glad when the morning
light through their tiny bedroom window grew bright enough to allow her to get
up. She rose as Mike slept on, and she crept down to the kitchen and dressed as
fast as she could. It was a good thing he was sleeping so deeply after his
night out. Finishing up with the packing had been easier.
She found a wet, sour-smelling washrag in a corner of the
kitchen sink, and though it didn’t matter anymore, she poured fresh water into
an empty dishpan, added some soap and a capful of bleach. She threw in the rag,
gave it a swish and a scrub, and hung it to dry on a peg next to the sink.
Turning away from that final chore, Inga pulled on her coat
and searched in the left pocket for a small jar of Imogen’s fancy French hand
cream. She unscrewed the silver lid and applied a generous dab to her rough
hands. As she smoothed the cream into her skin, she gazed into the middle
distance, then pulled a handwritten note from the right pocket and placed it on
the kitchen table.
December 21, 1918
Dear Michael,
I am too young for
this. I’ll always love you, but I am leaving. Please don’t try to find me.
Love, Ingeborg
She bowed her head over the table, pressing her palms
against the oilcloth that she had bought all those months ago with her pin
money and paused a moment — no, several long moments — eyes closed. A shadow
crossed her face.
Inga took a deep breath, straightened her back and opened
her eyes. She walked to the hall closet and pulled out a large leather valise, Imogen’s
valise, which Inga had been hiding for several days.
Grasping the handle with both hands, she heaved the
overpacked bag out the apartment’s front door, shut it quietly, and took care
not to make too much noise descending the tenement’s creaky stairs. At the
landing, she peeked out the entryway window at the patch of sky above the
buildings of the Lower East Side. The weather was clear, and the snow had
melted from the sidewalks of Rivington Street.
Inga stepped outside. She struggled down the stoop, crossed
Norfolk Street, and began her journey north with small, slow steps, dragging
her bag behind.
There. Now she was gone.
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